Scott's ponderousness and wordiness were out of step with Modernist sensibilities.
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Excessive wordiness and formality can come across as stilted, pretentious or forced.
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Quite right about the wordiness but I cross-posted as a response to another article.
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Also, China had to introduce competition to overcome extreme back-wordiness.
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In the last sentence of the first paragraph, there is a perfect example of wordiness.
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What dims his exhibition, at least for me, is its excessive wordiness.
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Any pockets of intellectual wordiness that crop up are tempered by his mellifluous phrasing.
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There are far fewer grammatical errors, but wordiness and awkward phrasing remains an issue.
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Too often, Walsh's wordiness gets in the way of characters'self-revelations and confessions.
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Prolixity: boring verbosity
(wordy) long-winded: using or containing too many words; "long-winded (or windy) speakers"; "verbose and ineffective instructional methods"; "newspapers of the day printed long wordy editorials"; "proceedings were delayed by wordy disputes"
Wordiness is the use of more words than necessary. As it makes a text slightly harder to read, it is usually discouraged. Blaise Pascal wrote to his cousin in apology, "I have made this letter longer because I have not had time to make it shorter".
The excessive, often unnecessary, use of words in a sentence